Tuesday, August 11, 2015

Crazy, Mixed Up Story...

We have been looking at how we can 'extend' our sentences and today we wrote a Crazy, Mixed up Story in our class groups.  Each person had to write one sentence and one sentence only before folding over the paper ready for the next person in the group.  The final stories are hilarious!

Here is the story from Group 1.

One day in Mexico...

It is lovely here with busy streets and I live out in the city.

We find a place called pizza land and pizza's start falling from the sky.

A boy named Bob who was 3 years old, had chubby cheeks and 'adorableness'.

I sit down on a hay bale, I take a nap and wake up feeling weird.

Up in the clouds there were two giants named Rob and Bob.

As I was trapped in the toilets, I tried jumping out, climbing underneath but I was stuck.

A clown said "Honk my nose"! and everybody stopped what they were doing and laughed.

Exploding and bangs in the houses destroyed.  Buildings falling down and burning lava in the background.

"And now there is one problem left". "What?" said everyone.  "I haven't cleaned the house in days!!!"

Suddenly Tom saw his worst fear, a dog!  A bulldog!  He hated bulldogs so he ran as fast as he could.

Bikers ride anywhere.

People are calming down but some are still very worried about it.

I was so emotional and everyone cried.

Sophie was shaken after the series of earthquakes, but really glad she was alive.


Here is the story from Group 2.

In a city called Madrid there was a little boy called Cristiano Ronaldo.

Sun shining on a farm.

In the fancy room in Australia that cost $2000.

He was a tall, bald man with a little moustache.

He was running away from a big fat bear that was trying to eat him.

There was a big explosion in the distance and he didn't know why.

Suddenly, a big spider jumped out of nowhere and was the size of a building!

He finished eating all of the blue cotton candy and slowly limped back but when he was walking home he fell off a cliff and landed on a pile of potatoes but a magic pig came and saved him.

It had been a while since the sun was up.  Stars were shining in the night sky, and the pale green grass was hardly visible.  Lights could be seen in the distance if you looked far enough.

It had been a while since the dragons had been released.  600 years in fact and the black knight had been worried as the dragons were after him.

The dragon soared through the sky with Winnie on his back.  They towered over buildings as his scales glistened in the sun.  It was a beautiful sight.  Just BEAUTIFUL!

I had McDonalds for breakfast.

After I had finished what I wanted to do I got happier and happier.

I am standing in a silent, dark lonely room staring at my feet.

When they got home they ate some waffles and it was poisonous so they died happily ever after!





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